more of my wonderful poetry

hey just wanted to update but i don't have a whole lot more to say. My weekend was really good, it felt a lot like summer cuz i had no hw and it was b-e-a uuuuutiful outside. anyways i have a couple poems to put up the first one needs some serious revising but thats ok.

Part of My Heart
I used to know u so well
we tlaked everyday
u told me everything
it felt like we were the same person
you completed me
and i loved you more than anything
...now not even a year later
i feel like you're a stranger
an acquaintance i once knew
we both hide it and pretend everything's the same
you still say "love ya lots"
but then tell me why are we so far apart?
now i'm half of me
because you still hold
the other part of my heart

Yours
I thought I needed a hug
now i know it had to be Your hug
I needed a hand to hold
not knowing it would never be good enough
unless it was Your hand
i needed a shoulder to cry on
Your shoulder just had to be the one
I wanted someone to hold me
but no one can the way You did
I need You here
no one else can fill the space
only You can make me whole again

so there they r. arent they wonderful? yea i kno i suck at writing but i love it so i dont care. *.....yopu found me when no one else was looking, how did u know just where I'd be?....*

Peace!
madelyn